Writing prompt: Every word counts

This is the sixth in a series of short writing prompts inspired by Stephen King's "On Writing":

p. 62-65: While in a college writing group, Stephen King discovered--and regretted the fact--that most young writers consider writing to be instant magic messages. Inspiration, these poets believe, is not to be questioned and does not need to be worked on. King and his future wife, Tabitha, however, believe writing to be a combination of inspiration and hard work. Write four lines of poetry quickly--the first thing that comes to your mind. Saving this first draft, work hard on another draft. Substitute words. Look for more lyrical or intense language. Try breaking the lines differently. When you’ve worked your four lines thoroughly, set the first and second draft aside. Go back later and see which poem you prefer.